I May Have Another Word Count Problem With This Novel

by Shelt Garner
@sheltgarner

The one piece of hope I have about this novel is that it tells a coherent, cogent story. And I’ve fixed a huge issue with the original version of the story — it’s a lot easier to explain –the novel is a about the struggle of a part-time sex worker to own a small town community newspaper.

The heroine of my novel looks like Morena Baccarin.

That’s a story that makes sense.

The SECOND story in the series is a murder mystery in the style of a Stieg Larsson novel. That, at least, is the goal.

But there is a problem — if you think on average each scene has 1,000 words, I’m in deep trouble. My novel is going to be about 160,000 words. Which, of course, is exactly where I was when I split the second draft of the novel in two in the first place.

And, yet, because the novel is far more coherent it’s a lot easier to simply edit down the word count if need be. Additionally, as I found out with the second draft, just because I have X number of scenes, doesn’t mean each one of those scenes will actually be 1,000 words.

My heroine sports a sleeve tattoo much like the one Megan Fox now has, even though I thought of the idea first!

I think that’s going just write the novel and then once I’m done with the third draft, it back and assess what options I have. But I also need to work on not just this novel, but the sequel to it as well as a separate scifi pandemic novel that I can potentially pitch for sale before the end of the year.

Or, put another way, I have to, as always, hurry up — the Fourth Turning or the Petite Singularity may arrive and make all of this moot.

Author: Shelton Bumgarner

I am the Editor & Publisher of The Trumplandia Report

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